Animals aren’t toys!
Hunting animals for sports should be banned this is because animals have feelings too, they aren’t made so we can use them for entertainment, and it’s also an animal abuse.
Hunting animals is cruel and hunting animals to use in sports is even worse because animals have feelings like humans, they have families like humans, and they love humans like we love animals. Animals are just like humans, but they are just in a different form. Hunting them is like us being arrested and put in jail. I mean like, who wants to be in jail? NO ONE! Yeah exactly, no one wants to be imprisoned and get treated terribly. So, for animals, getting hunted is like they are being arrested and put in jail and gets treated horribly. When they get told what to do, and they didn't do it, they will be punished for it. For example, you saw a dog walks like a person, it means, it's owner abuse and hurt the dog to make it walk like a person, and us humans we didn't know what the dog has been true through to entertain us. So I wonder if people who abuse animals was put to the animals' position and get abuse like what he did. Will he stop abusing animals?
I really like your introduction and use of language features Lindley; great stuff! Your next steps is to break up your writing into paragraphs. I'll help your understanding on that when we write a class essay next week :)
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with you Lindley!! Anything involving animal abuse should be banned. Imagine if it was us instead of animals. We wouldn't like that would we?
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ReplyDeletePassionate writing.. well done. How will you convince those who are currently OK with this though? What evidence could you bring to your writing to make it more convincing?