Creative Writing - SOST

My life in London is remarkably awful, horrible, and hard. I can't earn enough money to feed myself, and I always get sick because of the terrible pollution and the lack of clean water. I have to skip eating because I have to save enough money so I can get out of London and move to New Zealand. 

I always hated London because it's overpopulated, dirty and there's a lot of diseases. The diseases spread extremely fast because the streets are very dirty and damped. There is also no hospital nearby, so if you are ill, you will surely die. The kids work in the factory at a young age to help their parents. They work for long hours without a wage. I have to live in a house with several families living because I couldn't afford the rent of the house if I'm the only one's going to live in it. Living in a house with many people is very disgusting because you have to use the same water everyone uses to take a bath because it's hard to find enough clean water for everyone.

My journey on the ship was worse than my experience in London. My life on the ship was horrible because I was in the poor section of the ship and it was hot and crowded. I can see people dying directly in front of me, and just by staring at them, I can see that they have been through in a lot of pain.    

When I arrived in New Zealand, I was very cheerful that I've made it that far. I can smell the fresh air, and I can see clean running water everywhere. I can earn a lot of money to feed myself, and I can still have enough money to buy the things I want. There is a lot of opportunities and exciting jobs you can get in New Zealand. And the best thing I can get is, I can rent my own house, and I don't have to live with several families. I also don't need to bathe in used water because there's enough clean water for the people to take a bath. 

Since I have moved to New Zealand, my life has never been better like my life right, now and it's still getting better and better. I already have forgotten my past, and I don't want to think about it anymore. I hope that every people in London have the same life as me because they also deserve to have a better life and experience I am experiencing now.